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Cold call script template (with the coaching notes)

A five-block cold call script template: opener, problem, question, brush-off, small ask. Each block has the line, the timing and a coaching note.

A cold call script is the planned shape of the first sixty to ninety seconds of an unsolicited call: who you are, the problem you are calling about, one question, the answer to the likely brush-off, and a small ask. The template below gives each block a line to adapt, a time budget, and a coaching note the manager uses when reviewing the recording.

The first sixty to ninety seconds
  1. 01Opener0 to 10 seconds
  2. 02The problem10 to 25 seconds
  3. 03The question25 to 45 seconds
  4. 04The brush-offWhenever it comes
  5. 05The small askLast 15 seconds

It is part of our SDR coaching guide, which places the call inside the full outbound sequence.

The cold call script template

Block Time Line to adapt Coaching note: what good sounds like
1. Opener 0 to 10 seconds "[Name], it's [your name] at [company]. [One fact about their business they can check], and I'm calling about [the problem, in their words]." The buyer's world comes before yours. Name, company, then their fact. No "is now a bad time?" before the reason.
2. The problem 10 to 25 seconds "Most [role]s we talk to read that as [what they probably believe]. Where we have looked, it was [the cause you think it is]." One idea about their problem they had not considered. No product description or feature list.
3. The question 25 to 45 seconds "Is that holding up at your end, or is it [their likely explanation]?" A question they can answer from memory. Then the rep stops talking.
4. The brush-off Whenever it comes "Send me an email" → "Happy to. So it's useful, is [the problem] something you own, or should it go to someone else?" Acknowledge, then one question that keeps the problem on the table. Do not argue or pitch harder.
5. The small ask Last 15 seconds "Can I send you the [three things we saw / short note], and if it's relevant, we find twenty minutes?" An ask tied to what the buyer just said, small enough to agree to on the spot.

Voicemail version (about 15 seconds): "[Name], [your name] at [company]. I'm calling about [the problem] after seeing [the fact]. I've sent a note with the detail. My number is [number]."

Copy block for the rep's call notes:

Account:            [company]
Buyer:              [name, role]
Fact they can check: [job post / launch / filing, with date]
Problem (their words): [ ]
What they probably believe: [ ]
Opener line:        [ ]
Question:           [ ]
Brush-off answer:   [ ]
Small ask:          [ ]
Voicemail:          [ ]

How to use the template

  1. Fill it from the research. The fact, the problem and the belief come from fifteen minutes of account research. If any of the three is blank, the call is not ready.

  2. Match the email that came before it. If the cadence sent an email first, the opener refers to the same problem. A call that starts a new argument wastes the email. The cold email how-to builds the email from the same lines.

  3. Say the opener out loud before the call block. Two minutes, to the manager or a coach. The test is whether the first sentence names something in the buyer's world. Lines that read well often sound stiff when spoken, and only saying them reveals it.

  4. Write the brush-off answer before you need it. "Send me an email", "we're all set" and "not a priority" cover most of them. One question each, written down.

  5. Leave the script after block 3. Once the buyer is talking, the script has done its job. Listen, ask the next question, and come back to block 5 when it is time to close.

  6. Review the recording against the coaching notes. Each week, take one recorded call and find the block where the buyer decided. The coaching note for that block is the standard. Our guide to coaching cold calls runs the fifteen-minute debrief.

A filled-in example

Illustrative. The company, people and details are fictional.

Block Maya's line
1. Opener "Sam, it's Maya at Depotline. You've posted three night dispatch roles this month, and I'm calling about the handover between shifts."
2. The problem "Most dispatch heads we talk to read that as a staffing gap. Where we have looked, it was the handover note, and more people meant more handovers."
3. The question "Is the handover holding up at your end, or is it mostly a hiring question?"
4. The brush-off Sam: "Just send me an email." Maya: "Happy to. So it's useful, is the night handover yours, or does it sit with operations?"
5. The small ask "Can I send you the three things we saw at a freight company your size, and if it's relevant, we find twenty minutes?"
Voicemail "Sam, Maya at Depotline. I'm calling about the night handover after seeing your dispatch roles. I've sent a short note with the detail. I'm on 555 0142."

What the manager listens for in Maya's recording: did block 1 reach "the handover between shifts" before Sam interrupted, and did block 4 keep the handover on the table or fold into "sure, I'll email you"?

Getting past the gatekeeper

A gatekeeper call works best when it asks for direction and keeps the pitch for the buyer. The person who answers the main line is judged on protecting someone's time, so give them a reason to route you that has nothing to do with your product.

Situation Line to adapt Coaching note
You know the name "Hi, it's [your name] at [company]. Could you put me through to [name]? It's about [the problem, in their words]." Say it as if you expect to be connected. One reason, no detail.
You do not know the name "I'm hoping you can point me in the right direction. Who looks after [the problem] there?" Ask for help, then use their answer in the next call.
"What's it regarding?" "The [fact they can check]. I'm calling about [the problem] and wanted to check it's [name]'s area before I send anything." The same fact as the opener. Never "just a quick call".
"Send it to the general inbox" "Will do. Whose attention should it go to, so it reaches the right person?" Leave with a name, even if you leave without the transfer.

Log what the gatekeeper told you. The name, the best time and the way they described the problem all go into the copy block for the next attempt.

Answers to the common brush-offs

Most brush-offs on a cold call fall into a short list, and each one gets one written answer that ends in a question about the problem. "Send me an email" is covered in block 4; the rest are below. Write yours into block 4 before the call block, and practice them out loud as often as the opener.

Brush-off Answer to adapt What it is doing
"We're all set." "Good to hear. When you looked at [the problem] last, what did you settle on?" Asks for their current answer, without disputing it
"Not a priority right now." "Fair. What would have to happen for [the problem] to move up the list?" Finds the trigger, which tells you when to call back
"I don't have time." "Understood. Thirty seconds: [the problem in one sentence]. Worth a proper conversation, or not for you?" Asks for a tiny amount of time and offers an easy no
"How much does it cost?" "Depends on [the one thing that sets the price]. How many [units] does your team run today?" Answers honestly, then turns it into discovery
"How did you get my number?" "From [the source]. I called because of [the fact], and I'll take you off the list if it's not relevant." Plain answer, then the reason for the call

If the same brush-off comes back three times on one rep's calls, look at block 1. A weak opener invites "send me an email" more than any other line.

Three variants of the opener

The template's block 1 changes with what you know about the account. Use these when you have a referral, a trigger event or an earlier touch to point to.

Referral opener. "[Name], it's [your name] at [company]. [Referrer] suggested I call. They said you were looking at [the problem]." Check the referral with the referrer first, and use their words for the problem.

Trigger-event opener. "[Name], [your name] at [company]. I saw [the event: the hire, the launch, the funding, the new site], and teams that do that usually hit [the problem] soon after. Is that on your radar?" The event has to be recent and checkable, and it has to connect to the problem in one step.

Follow-up opener (after a voicemail or an email). "[Name], [your name] at [company]. I left you a message on [day] about [the problem]. Did the note I sent land, or should I give you the short version?" Name the earlier touch once, then get back to the problem. A follow-up call that only asks "did you get my email?" gives the buyer nothing to answer.

Three ways teams misuse a cold call script

Reading it word for word. Buyers hear a script in the first sentence. The template is a set of lines to make your own and say out loud until they sound like you.

One script for every account. A template with the fact and the problem left generic ("I'm calling about efficiency") is a cold call nobody asked for. Blocks 1 and 2 change for every account, because the research changes. Blocks 4 and 5 can stay stable.

Writing more scripts in place of coaching the calls. When calls go badly, teams often add openers to the library. The faster fix is usually one recording reviewed against the coaching notes, one block identified, and one line rewritten and said out loud.

Coaching the script for every SDR

A manager can review one call per SDR per week. Prepping every opener before every call block is more than one person can cover. Caty, our AI sales expert for live deals, works with each SDR: she preps the opener by voice before the dial (the account, the problem, the brush-off they expect) and takes the transcript afterward, line by line, scored on the team's own standard. When the floor is too loud to talk, the SDR types.

Our AI sales experts score the email that came before the call in the team's own prospecting method, and the SDR manager sees the pattern across the team (for SDRs). Before tomorrow's call block, write Maya's five lines for your first account and say block 1 out loud; for coaching the whole SDR team, talk to us.

FAQ

What is a good cold call opener?

A good cold call opener names something in the buyer's business they can check, then says which problem you are calling about, within about ten seconds. "You've posted three night dispatch roles this month, and I'm calling about the handover between shifts" works. "Is now a bad time?" before any reason gives the buyer an easy way out.

How long should a cold call script be?

A cold call script should cover the first sixty to ninety seconds: opener, problem, one question, the brush-off answer and a small ask. After the buyer starts talking, the conversation replaces the script. Longer scripts push reps to keep reading when they should be listening.

What do you say when a prospect says "send me an email"?

Agree, then ask one question that keeps the problem on the table: "Happy to. So it's useful, is this something you own, or should it go to someone else?" That turns a brush-off into a short conversation about who owns the problem. Then send the email you promised, referring to what they said.

What should a cold call voicemail say?

A cold call voicemail should say your name and company, the problem you are calling about, the fact that prompted the call, that the detail is in an email, and your number. Keep it to about fifteen seconds. It works as one touch in a sequence, paired with the email that follows it.

Should a cold call ask for a meeting?

Ask for something smaller first, tied to what the buyer just said, such as sending a short note on what you have seen elsewhere. Once they agree, finding twenty minutes is an easy next step. A meeting request in the first thirty seconds, before the buyer has said anything about the problem, usually ends the call.

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